I neeed your help!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have to write an acknowledgment for my master thesis and I want to thank my parents ..Since english is not my native language ...could you tell me if my writing is ok or not ...maybe you could tell me how to improve the following lines ...THANK YOU!!!!
"… special thanks to my parents, who always encouraged me to become what I want, for giving me the opportunity to study biology as well as their encouragement, love and understanding not only during this master thesis but throughout my entire life."
Please please help me :-)!!!
xoxo,
Avian
I have to write an acknowledgment for my master thesis and I want to thank my parents ..Since english is not my native language ...could you tell me if my writing is ok or not ...maybe you could tell me how to improve the following lines ...THANK YOU!!!!
"… special thanks to my parents, who always encouraged me to become what I want, for giving me the opportunity to study biology as well as their encouragement, love and understanding not only during this master thesis but throughout my entire life."
Please please help me :-)!!!
xoxo,
Avian
JAN 06, 2013 12:24 PM
My only recommendation would be to insert the word "have" in your first line.
Like this :
"...special thanks to my parents who have always encouraged me..."
Otherwise I think its sounds great 
JAN 06, 2013 12:26 PM
You don't need help.....that is lovely.......mhef
JAN 06, 2013 04:53 PM
JAN 07, 2013 08:52 AM
JAN 08, 2013 09:00 AM
You guys are AWESOME!!!!! you make me feel confident ..that's exactly what I need right now :-) !!!!
Thank you so much for your comments they all helped me so much!!!
xoxo
