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Kraven I shot a new set for Shipwreck and it comes out Wed. GET EXCITED!

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MAY 8, 2011 @ 08:40 PM


So I know I told you all a while back I spent a day shooting and playing around with my camera with one of my besties Oogie and I said I was going to eventually submit the set. But I have such easy access to her that we both felt we wanted to get some honest feedback before submitting a set. So keep in mind please this set has not been photoshopped in any way. I really love a lot of the images in this set and it is neat to see a model who I have seen so many times in other peoples eyes/ lenses....but then to see her in my eye and my view is really neat. I find her bone structure so incredibly sexy. So of course I concentrated on parts of her I found to be her assets. This is one of my fave images from this set for that reason. I find it really beautiful.
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I know I need to pay a little more attention to detail...such as reflection lights. But other then that... it is fair game for you to take a look at and give your honest opinions.....critiques.....what you loved about it...what you think I could improve on....etc. This is a tester. So we are hoping there are things you want me to improve on so I can better myself and hopefully get to staff status. But we are also hoping there are things you love...which I would love to hear as well. You can comment on the actual set or on my blog. Either will work. But I would really appreciate everyone who reads my blogs or has stopped by to take a look and let me know what you think.

I plan to shoot with her again soon and I have a really wonderful idea. So we figured this would be a test and the next one we will work on and submit. I really take this seriously and hope you guys will let me know what you think. It is fun to venture out and do what I have wanted to do for so long.

Here is the link to the set:

PILLOW TALK - OOGIE

You really are missing out if you don't check out this hottie. JUST SAYING. I KNOW THESE THINGS!

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**ALSO OOGIE....I LOVE YOU AND HAVE TO SAY THANKS FOR ALLOWING ME THE OPPORTUNITY TO WORK WITH YOU TO BETTER MYSELF. IT MEANS A LOT. SO THANKS!**

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HeartBaker

HeartBaker

Fresno, CA
October 2007

MAY 08, 2011 08:55 PM

I seriously love the different angels.

jimcurt99

jimcurt99

Tucson, AZ
August 2010

MAY 08, 2011 08:57 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!! The only thing I can see wrong- in some of the shots with the window you can see the lights reflecting off of them- it's the ONLY artificial vibe I get from the whole thing. She is AMAZING- the photos are fantastic- LOVE IT!!!!!

wasdpwnt

wasdpwnt

Charlotte, NC
September 2009

MAY 08, 2011 08:58 PM

Looks great, you did a great job smile

suispud1

suispud1

Dallas, TX
January 2010

MAY 08, 2011 09:20 PM

I tend not to criticize technical aspects of something I know nothing about (like photography). But I know what I like aesthetically. So I'm quite taken with the style and the photos are eye catchers. All in all, well done.

Cashmir

Cashmir

HOPEFUL

USA

MAY 08, 2011 09:20 PM

I think you did a good job. I love the lighting in 33. I think once you get the lighting and everything set you'll be amazing. love the angles.

PaulNikon

PaulNikon

Palm Bay, FL
February 2003

MAY 08, 2011 09:25 PM

*pulls it out*

Draftsman

Draftsman

Chicago, IL
August 2009

MAY 08, 2011 09:27 PM

Okay here goes nothing.
I want to say that I really liked your last blog entry and I love your sets and Oogie's . So I saw this tester and I have some ideas. Remember that I rant and tend to be annoying so you can feel free to dismiss me, but I still want to buy a print from you at Wizard World this year so please do not hate me.

First of all I love the intro pictures when she is reading "The Walking Dead". The way she becomes aware of the precense of the camera and starts to get undressed. I really liked the color of her make up and how it all has this purple in the picture and it makes Oogie's eyes really stand out. I love it up to the image where the bone on her back stands out her scapula ( I had to look it up on wikipedia.I hope I am right. ) I can see how this is playing on the angular feel of her body in this images , but I do not like them. I love her look and bone structure , but it exaggerates an angularity of her body and features. However I loved the one where she is grabbing her hair. He scapula still stick out , but her face and look draw me in and then allow me to see her whole. Image 19 is perfect I love the image triangle composition and th look over the shoulder.

The next images are so seductive. I love pictures with reflections and the way she looks at the camera and the smiling and winking face on her butt. The few shots after that lose me for a bit , but when she sucks her pinkie and slides her under wear off . I am hooked again. I loved the way you use reflection on the following images and continue to draw the viewer into her face and body. I was hoping for more mirrors, but that is part of the sensuality of this set for me.

Images number 55 and 56. I loved it , it was sultry it captures all of Oogie and her look. He face face , legs and all of her are present. There is a physicality without being too explicit , but explicit enough.

I loved this set and I loved seeing something a bit more in the development process. If she goes to Wizard World or if only one of you goes. I want a print of this image signed by both you and her. I really love it as is.

I hope this is helpful and I really liked this set .






Leilee

Leilee

SUICIDEGIRL

Tennessee, USA

MAY 08, 2011 09:56 PM

get it girl! <3<3

bendingunit23

bendingunit23

Canada
April 2005

MAY 08, 2011 10:03 PM

Ok set commentary.

Great start. I think 7 and 8 feel a bit unprofessional. 9 is nice. Maybe the order could changed a bit 10 with the shirt a bit lower still, 12 zoomed out a bit, 11, 13 with the shirt somewhere in frame. 16-18 wicked shoulder blade. 21 maybe zoom in or out a bit. All the little round mirror give you some cool shot, but others are sort of wasted. 22 is a good one, with bits of her in 3 mirrors. 23 not so much. What's the focus of 25? it could easly be a great shot across her panties and back. 26 maybe move a bit to show both nipples or hide one with her arm. Maybe brush the few loose hairs away from her face. 30 is a nice shot. Maybe you could go with a different order for 34,32,33. 35 is a nice shot. It may transition better to 36 if 36 was zoomed out a bit. I think the mirrors work against you in 39 too. 40 and 41 are a nice reviel. 43 great shot of her ribs and the shadow down her ribcage. 47 nice mirror shot, and 49 if a little abstract. I like 50. 51 nice thighs, and again 52. 54 either pan onto her which I admit you maybe be avoiding to be less explicit or away and show the last bit of leg you can. 57, 58, 59 are great shots. 60 doesn't need to be there. 65 is a nice shot but doesn't really serve as a good ending point.

Hope that helps, keep having a blast with Oogie

superdave69

superdave69

Alsip, IL
February 2008

MAY 08, 2011 10:05 PM

with out looking at the link yet i can say you did a great job. she is a beautiful person. the pic alone with lookin at the camera is stunning she has stunning eyes.

EroticGeek

EroticGeek

Ansted, WV
July 2010

MAY 08, 2011 10:21 PM

The set looks awesome. That is so cool that you actually got to shoot someone who you consider to be a friend. That makes the shoot so much more fun and exciting.

Avenall

Avenall

HOPEFUL

Berkeley, CA

MAY 09, 2011 12:10 AM

SO gorgeous, I love them! Creative mirrors smile

chiwi

chiwi

New Zealand
January 2011

MAY 09, 2011 03:05 AM

know nuthin bout photography,but know whatni like,and i likebiggrin

theYerg

theyerg

Charlotte, NC
October 2004

MAY 09, 2011 03:46 AM

good poses. accentuated her hips and shoulder blades....

Decklynn

Decklynn

HOPEFUL

Ashtabula, OH

MAY 09, 2011 04:15 AM

Oogie is gorgeous love

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