SuicideGirl: Abbiss
suicidegirl

Abbiss is probably improbably back ?

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MARCH 22, 2010 @ 10:51 AM


I need anyone who can speak good English to correct an essay I just wrote.

Now.

It is about 600 words long and about god being dead. I don't believe in god at all so what I wrote can make you really angry if you are pious.

It is quite simple, I could not develop it because of the number of words allowed and had to keep it simple anyway. You'd just have to correct the vocabulary and the grammar. Not the content.

Anyone? I have to give it in in 5 hours.


Thank you very very much!

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droopy99

droopy99

USA
February 2008

MAR 22, 2010 10:58 AM

I can do this now for you, how would you like to send it to me?

Rosaleigh

Rosaleigh

SUICIDEGIRL

Illinois, USA

MAR 22, 2010 11:23 AM

If you still need someone to proofread, and you can get it to me within the next 10 minutes, I'll take a look at it. smile

jeffyjr

jeffyjr

Waipahu, HI
December 2007

MAR 22, 2010 02:16 PM

Love to help anyway I can my dear.

BJ122632

BJ122632

USA
November 2005

MAR 22, 2010 03:54 PM

i can do it for you, how do i get your copysmile

mssasha

mssasha

Detroit, MI
November 2006

MAR 22, 2010 04:01 PM

I can check the grammars. tongue

JustBlaze

JustBlaze

Clifton, NJ
April 2006

MAR 22, 2010 04:08 PM

I think the time frame for it being due is now, but here is a definite sign of being extermely hot. You post something up about people proof reading a 600 word essay and you get multiple offers. lol I dont think it would work the other way around if I tried. wink

anticool

anticool

Los Angeles, CA
January 2005

MAR 22, 2010 04:26 PM

Not sure when you posted this, but I will give a look over if you like.
I am don't with class for the day.

axeman520

axeman520

USA
September 2004

MAR 22, 2010 08:21 PM

Sorry I saw this too late frown

ron4164

ron4164

Ponchatoula, LA
January 2007

MAR 22, 2010 08:25 PM

Hope you do well with it Abbiss. smile

DarkWest

DarkWest

Los Angeles, CA
April 2007

MAR 22, 2010 10:26 PM

sounds like this essay on God is very important hopefully your essay got a descent grade on it

DW <3

chimeraleon

chimeraleon

San Diego, CA
April 2005

MAR 22, 2010 11:06 PM

Delighted to assist with future endeavors.

JoeMallik

JoeMallik

Milwaukee, WI
April 2007

MAR 23, 2010 08:19 AM

Sorry I saw this too late. Hope you did well with it, anyway. Will you post it in your blog? Even if it is too late, everyone can go over it and maybe you'll learn something you can use next time.

FitzSimmons

FitzSimmons

Saint Paul, MN
January 2008

MAR 23, 2010 02:30 PM

Even if I had seen this in time I'm probably not the best person to ask, I struggle with grammar and punctuation, but I hope it went well. smile

Turbulence

Turbulence

Austria
November 2005

MAR 24, 2010 04:50 PM

hope it worked out!

mssasha

mssasha

Detroit, MI
November 2006

MAR 24, 2010 08:39 PM

I think you'll gonna pass this essay.

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