Your cute as hell
I think the sets background is wayyy to busy even though I loveee it but it doesnt let you stand out... and we need more naky pictures of you gorgeouse... just giving some positive feedback
I'm going to make an attempt at giving you some creative feedback, or, as I prefer, criticism (3. a. The practice of analyzing, classifying, interpreting, or evaluating literary or other artistic works.)
There are certain aspects to a set which I sometimes notice as being significant to an accepted set and I'm going to look at it mostly in consideration of these. It is not a complete list of considerations actually considered by the powers-that-be while judging sets, just some things I think I've noticed and they are: theme, colour scheme, mood, and variety of poses. I'm only going to bring up those things which seem lacking (in comparison to accepted sets.)
Your mood varies a bit from hardcore (distant) to coy to playful, etc and this is mostly pretty good but sometimes your body expression in relation to the camera (and thus the viewer) seem kind of awkward (like in pictures 4 and 5.) There are some images where you seem to have reasserted dominance over the camera like in 36, 42, 46 just to name some examples but there needs to be more variety of pose and angle.
Overall your set is not altogether bad it just needs a little bit of a mood lightener in some frames and a bit more variety of bodily expression (body language) varying camera angles. It's not because it "needs more vag" as someone eloquently placed in the tags. Don't give up, your set was rejected but it isn't completely unacceptable, it just needs some tweaking. Have a great day.
21
method
United Kingdom
February 2005
NOV 28, 2007 05:36 AM
WHY oh WHY would anyone reject such a hot lady with quality photos!??
Great set. Simple, but you look great and know how to pose well and have a beautiful, expressive face. And I love the Detestation shirt. You have good taste.
25
DBarker
I'm lost
August 2004
NOV 28, 2007 08:50 AM
This set should not be in the "hopefuls" section! Absolutely bueatiful!
IPOD
RADIO
Dimmi
SUICIDEGIRL
California, USA
NOV 30, 1999 12:00 AM