Haiku

My attemp at haiku


Friends in misery
We share our pain and sadness
Until time heals all

For those we love most
The worst atrocities are
savored and relished

post your own

Fear my haiku-fu
For I shall bitchslap your ass
But now I must sleep

sure enough. can you move it?
<edit>you already did. Thanks</edit>

I've been looking around and I can't see what the real difference is between senryu and haiku. Can you enlighten me




[Edited on May 05, 2005 by abrown28]

Tempted though I am to act like I didn't look it up, http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Senryu

Just subject matter and tone.

Love, a fickle dream
Perception is reality
Dream is destiny

Life out of control
No sense of moderation
In Silliness board

Nine in the morning
Gonna be late for work again
Must leave computer

Tea,toast and SG..
AGH! Four sets of claws on thighs!
I'm bleeding, dumb cat.

Sit in my lap now.
Wait, you're crushing my ballbag.
Move your bony ass.

A crash reduces
your expensive computer
to a simple stone.

theres no such thing as
an american haiku
it's not five seven five

My tribute to the Montell Williams show. Ahem.

Oh Montell, you bitch
You cry lots, Baldy Von Bald
Your eyes should be poked

oh, no! a glass of water? you clearly aren't cool enough to participate in this thread. until next time!

[Edited on Jun 02, 2005 by Koenigsegg]

i thought you were going to bed

Oh Dying of thirst
Wish I had a tasty drink
Dry. Boo fucking hoo.

Shit shit shit shit SHIT
Shit shit shitty shitty shit
Shit shit shitty shit

Tell it to Kerouac!

Alcohol in glass
Tastes like candy on the lips
The night is a blur

please more spread teh legz.
are you kidding me right now?
whats a nubian?

Japanese haiku
In fact is five seven five
But not syllables

"This is a haiku
I'm not trying very hard
one, two, three, four, five"

I wish so hard that i could take credit for that...

Your poetry touches my heart.
















Not!

Heartland love affair
Keeps us warm through cold winters
Milwaukee Threesome