MEAT: Part Four.

Part Four: Core[Edited on Aug 07, 2002 by INKEDgirl]

[Edited on Sep 16, 2002 by INKEDgirl]

nice. this is the first time i'm reading any of this. i like it a lot. i'm going to have to read it again more carefully when i get some time.

i liked this except for the first paragraph again and maybe the last sentence.

well, kiddo it looks like it's just you and me should end it.
kind of chilling.

Big thanks to all for reading and adding any input.

Thanks, Fly. I've got some editing to do!!

editing is the hardest part but for you it shouldn't be too difficult and it might even be fun because you have great guts of an awesome story or novel here.

Al: I submitted the first part weeks and weeks ago. I never heard back. I didn't get my feelings hurt or anything, I just thought it was probably too graphic for them to endorse through the site. I still wanted help and input on it so I decided to post it here. Thanks.

Fly: (insert happy noise here).

Jeez Inky, who woulda thunk these things run through your head all day?

Nice writing, Miss Lindsay. It reminds me of something from a 'zine a friend of mine did years ago called "Twilight Of The Idols". (gotta love a 'zine dedicated to nihlism!) I'll see if I can track it down and post it.

INKED, this is some fantastic stuff. Check your email when you get a chance (I sent you a message through your profile, but I have NO idea if you'll actually get it)... I'd like to talk to you about publishing this series on my site.

BTW, I knew I should tack this up somewhere.. This is all copyrighted BY ME!



[Edited on Aug 08, 2002 by INKEDgirl]

Actually, with a brilliant story like thses, there should be a board for some stories!