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INKEDgirl

INKEDgirl

I'm lost
OLD SKOOL

AUG 07, 2002 01:08 PM

Part Four: Core[Edited on Aug 07, 2002 by INKEDgirl]

[Edited on Sep 16, 2002 by INKEDgirl]

tetsuo

tetsuo

I'm lost
OLD SKOOL

AUG 07, 2002 01:16 PM

eeek biggrin

sixsixty

sixsixty

Oakland, CA
OLD SKOOL

AUG 07, 2002 01:28 PM

nice. this is the first time i'm reading any of this. i like it a lot. i'm going to have to read it again more carefully when i get some time.

akaFLYRITE

akaFLYRITE

I'm lost
July 2002

AUG 07, 2002 01:41 PM

i liked this except for the first paragraph again and maybe the last sentence.

well, kiddo it looks like it's just you and me should end it.
kind of chilling.

INKEDgirl

INKEDgirl

I'm lost
OLD SKOOL

AUG 07, 2002 01:44 PM

Big thanks to all for reading and adding any input.

Thanks, Fly. I've got some editing to do!! biggrin

Al

Al

SUICIDEGIRL

Christmas Island

AUG 07, 2002 01:48 PM

Hey girlie, why don't you submit all this to the words section of SG? It's all very good.

akaFLYRITE

akaFLYRITE

I'm lost
July 2002

AUG 07, 2002 01:49 PM

INKEDgirl said:
Big thanks to all for reading and adding any input.

Thanks, Fly. I've got some editing to do!! biggrin



editing is the hardest part but for you it shouldn't be too difficult and it might even be fun because you have great guts of an awesome story or novel here.

INKEDgirl

INKEDgirl

I'm lost
OLD SKOOL

AUG 07, 2002 01:52 PM

Al: I submitted the first part weeks and weeks ago. I never heard back. I didn't get my feelings hurt or anything, I just thought it was probably too graphic for them to endorse through the site. I still wanted help and input on it so I decided to post it here. Thanks. smile

Fly: smile (insert happy noise here).

googused

googused

Portland, OR
OLD SKOOL

AUG 07, 2002 02:40 PM

Jeez Inky, who woulda thunk these things run through your head all day? biggrin

Nice writing, Miss Lindsay. It reminds me of something from a 'zine a friend of mine did years ago called "Twilight Of The Idols". (gotta love a 'zine dedicated to nihlism!) I'll see if I can track it down and post it.

LothianInnerfilt

LothianInnerfilt

Palmyra, PA
August 2002

AUG 08, 2002 04:17 PM

INKED, this is some fantastic stuff. Check your email when you get a chance (I sent you a message through your profile, but I have NO idea if you'll actually get it)... I'd like to talk to you about publishing this series on my site.

INKEDgirl

INKEDgirl

I'm lost
OLD SKOOL

AUG 08, 2002 08:15 PM

BTW, I knew I should tack this up somewhere.. This is all copyrighted BY ME! biggrin



[Edited on Aug 08, 2002 by INKEDgirl]

bpet

bpet

Burkina Faso
OLD SKOOL

AUG 08, 2002 08:25 PM

Actually, with a brilliant story like thses, there should be a board for some stories!

Roxy

Roxy

SUICIDEGIRL

California, USA

AUG 08, 2002 09:36 PM

I've already said it a million times, but lemme comment one more time: You're an amazing writer biggrin

INKEDgirl

INKEDgirl

I'm lost
OLD SKOOL

AUG 08, 2002 09:37 PM

love