a haiku mindset

seventeen sylables
can recreate a moment
or just tell a joke!

and I will start off
to give you an idea
of how dumb I am

this simple format
filled with possibilities
this can stretch your brain!

i'm no good at these
but I will support this thread
since I like haikus

even a third time
i cannot get it right so
Koenigsegg must try

[Edited on Jan 16, 2005 by auralpleasure]

I am a novice
that's why I had to edit
to hide the mistake

with the haiku form
so much can really be said
in so little words

i don't even know where to begin to correct that

in so little time
something big can be expressed
haikus are perfect

Sorry, it's late, but you should have told me in my journal, so we could keep the illusion.

dry itchy eyes burn
ive been up too long need sleep
friggin r. e. 4.

if only i could
delete all of my bad posts
i would feel less dumb

I like writing these
Sometimes mine aren't very good
but I still write them

looking for true lust
qoth the server, "404"
your page didn't load.

it's about practice
and no matter how dumb you are
haikus are easy

the nights are lonely
and dark yet the computer
fans me with its noise

I do not post much
But i like Haikus a lot
so now i post one

I love the haikus
I was really unaware
everyone was fans!

if you touch yourself
and there is no harm in that
your boyfriend sucks balls!

in this world
we walk on hell's roof
gazing at flowers

by master haiku poet kobayashi issa
(translation hurts the meter ... not the poem.)

issa!

now some of my own:

small frog on the porch -
your belly on the cool ground.
please, don't sing tonight.

a knock at my door.
i cross the room to greet you.
it is only wind.

dark figures approach,
wind blows on the candle's flame.
the figures retreat

i expect you home.
waiting up till all hours.
even the moon laughs!

sleep is for the weak
just made a pot of french press
o my nerves my nerves

With you in my room
We do it like animals.
Shh! I hear my mom.

It is funny that
your introduction has the
wrong syllable count.