Whitney Pastorek: Cartwheels

This is why I do not write. I cannot write. How do you even attempt such a thing when you read something that is this interesting. So FUCKING interesting, without even having a real point. I mean, sure I could make one up. There are one hundred one things I could get from this. In reality however, there was no point.

I think I'm going to remain content being a reader. Maybe that's the key to becoming a writer?

Regardless.. simply amazing. This goes on the website.

Thank-you.

nice

wow this was fantastic!! it completely reminds me of the city, and randall sounds oddly like a gay boy to me... such a good story

I'm glad you all liked the story so much. Whitney is a fantastic writer, and you can find lots of her stuff at her Website, or by Googling her name. She also edits a top notch literary magazine called Pindeldyboz.

Really awesome. I hope there's more fiction in the future.

This was really great, very enjoyable and slightly surreal. I love when SG posts short stories.

This work is utterly fantaboulas! Thank you so much for writing and posting it!!!!

That was amazing. I want to meet a guy like Randall.

once i started i couldn't get back to work until the end

or until i'm done with this comment

Wow! This was really great. You are amazingly talented, and I am utterly jealous!