an honest question.

hey kids.
i draw a cartoon. that sort of thing happens to some of us. we spend our early lives reading comics, redrawing them.... it's pretty embarrassing.
i've been gone from here for a while (gone from sg, i mean, i had to take a break, monetary reasons mostly, but then laziness and forgetfulness, drawing cartoons doesn't make you rich most times), but from my experiences i trust the folks on this site... can you give me an honest opinion of my cartoon? i'd super big time appreciate it.

if you get the chance, y'know. no obligation. grade D but edible!

thanks guys, in advance. x's n o's.