Sean Manseau: Lapdance

yay. that was great. i liked it.

fabulous. reminds me of a girl i used to know...

i am so glad this got put up!

yay dammit.

even better the second time. nice going, dammit. great piece.

Good story - especailly having worked at MB!

Is it just me or was there a paragraph missing in the middle?

damn you're right googuse! a whole juicy part left out! i just edited it back in.

Can't get one past me!

I love this story. :-)

Definitely left me wanting more......

booooiiiinnnnggggg!!!

seriously, though, great story- see, men DO think during sex! (maybe)

man you kids are sweet. it was nice to walk in to work all bleary eyed this morning and read your kind comments. thanks so much.

dammit, your story rocks. i hope you'll have some more for us soon

wow I just read that.

that was hot!

great pacing...I love how it built up slowly to the feverish climax and then collasped, wearily and pleasantly dizzy, on the floor.

I thought it was boring and pretentious.

fucking amazing. Scenery was crystal clear. Anyone named christina in that story, by any chance? Law student; bitch...

Just kidding. Good fucking story. I'll be reading parts of that again soon.

great pacing and descriptions. kept me reading.

i wonder if there is more to this story...?

hey, i just got a deal for the novel that arose from this piece. the publisher wants to do a "focus group" reading--kind of like a test screening--as part of the editorial process, and they want to see various demographic groups represented...in particular, strippers, internet geeks, religious studies majors and latinos. if you happen to one (or more) of these categories, and you feel like lending a hand, drop me a line at dammit@dammit.com.

Wow, so glad I found this 'cause it's amazing. Thanks for that.

A great read
like you were there the whole time watching it all go down
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