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Sean

Sean

STAFF

Los Angeles, CA

MAR 28, 2003 05:00 PM

A man thinks: "Geez, some 'strawberry pie' would taste good right now."



He hurries over to a certain house. A redhead leads him upstairs to her room. She slips off her dressing gown and stretches unabashedly among the pillows. The man feasts his eyes on her, especially that curly hair. He kneels between her legs and reaches for her loins.



"Before I use my fork, I'm going to lick the plate clean!" he tells her, winking.



She chuckles. The man lowers his head, passionately. At a certain point,...

Lesa

Lesa

I'm lost
OLD SKOOL

MAR 28, 2003 05:05 PM

Uhhhh.....

TygerTyger

TygerTyger

Canada
March 2003

MAR 28, 2003 05:19 PM

Yeah. I second that "Uhhh." I at least understood the first two stories, but this one... I guess it's good? (I really have no idea and am just trying to fake my way through this comment.)

Stiles

Stiles

New York, NY
November 2002

MAR 28, 2003 05:33 PM

I don't get it.

Could someone clue me in?

moondaddy

moondaddy

Houston, TX
January 2003

MAR 28, 2003 05:48 PM

Hannh??

Bionicfemme

Bionicfemme

San Francisco, CA
July 2002

MAR 29, 2003 03:24 AM

Yeah, the conclusion could have been a bit stronger.

Will we see erotica written by women sometime in the future? So far, I have only seen erotica written by this Barry chap. Not that it's bad or anything...but a female writer would be able to offer a different erotic perspective that I think would be very interesting.

mortenal

mortenal

Seattle, WA
February 2003

MAR 30, 2003 08:26 PM

I think the author was going to go somewhere with that... maybe he forgot?

I'll second the request for female-authored literature. I'd bet at least a handful of these beautiful girls know how to write.

moondaddy

moondaddy

Houston, TX
January 2003

MAR 31, 2003 03:11 PM

Hey, whaddya know, it's been revised!

Don't read the next paragraph if you want to figure the story out for yourself.

Okay, I had assumed this was what Yourgrau was going for in the first version, but it seemed there were too many blanks for the reader to fill in. It's like a "closed loop" story... or maybe an infinite regress? This coroner is now going to go off and visit perhaps the same redhead, go down on her, get hit by a truck, and another coroner will examine his body, find more red hairs, get another "delightful idea" and so on... with a string of coroners being lead to the same fate by one woman (unwittingly on her part?). Heh, kind of like a twisted version of the poem "La Belle Dame Sans Merci" by John Keats.

Calamity

Calamity

SUICIDEGIRL

New York, USA

FEB 03, 2008 12:56 PM

MisterLinguist

MisterLinguist

Birmingham, AL
October 2005

FEB 03, 2008 04:04 PM

Calamity said: