3rd trys hopefully a charm re edited version

hey all i sent this one in before, but not everyone like the photos in it. so i edited it and took out the offensive photos. hopefully this time it will get better reviews. Thanks.

Very Nice !!

very nice

Adorable!

It still needs better flow, also too many repetetive shots. Just trying to give positive suggestions!

wow.

I salute you.

you are so pretty... but maybe a better setting?...
and no flash?... otherwise, you are beautiful!<3

GREAT GEREAT

Your look is so inviting and sexy.....love your breast.

you're beautiful

but you need more sequential photos and no flash...try a professiona photografer...

good luck!

I think you need some ink work done, maybe a piercing or two. The next step would be a better setting with a professional photographer. You could totally do it. Otherwise I'd tell you something like "nice try" or "really not for you". That's my two cents. Good luck to you.

nice and sexy girl!

Sweet.............yummy.

You took out "offensive" pics? Ghaha. What did I miss. For real tho, I think the biggest flaw is the lighting and scenery. The background doesn't really do anything for you nor does it evoke feelings in the viewer. The lighting is just wrong, get a "professional" to shoot you? I do think you should try again tho, don't wanna discourage you.

You have a beautiful smile! Stunning!!!!

Fuck

wow!

I see that I'm not the only naughty girl here.

This set has some busy and distracting backgrounds. It's a nice set, the brown leather boots are a good look for you in this set. My favorite is #14 you're sitting on the floor you bring the viewer from top left through the photo to bottom right. Couple of things you could change in the pose. Your right hand looks squished and it throws off your shoulder. Also your right leg from the knee is missing. You could try resting your right elbow on something and letting your right foot move out to your left.